There are shadows that don’t match their shape,
Promises that were only ever made.
Not kept.
Waves come crawling back to the shore,
On their hands and knees and full of remorse,
They can’t go back.
Not any more.
One day, people will wake up and open their eyes,
Hollowness will fill up and chemistry will override,
And life will go on.
Maybe we’ll stop doing things whilst not really knowing why,
Stop sitting in the dark and spark a fire.
Maybe we’ll set light to our hearts and learn how to truly love.
Maybe…
And I’ll look out for you because, for a reason I don’t even know,
the perfect, hazy memory of you fills my soul.
And I need you.
I need you so bad.
I think of all the nights I’ll cry
because I don’t have the answer,
or the reason why.
And that destroys me.
I dream of shadows that don’t match their shape,
Promises that are only made,
Never kept.
And I need you.
I need you so bad.
…beautiful….
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Thank you so much, Hannah. Not sure where the inspiration came from, but hey ho! π
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*jaw drops*
THIS IS AWESOME
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Haha, thank you, Emmie.
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This had such an otherworldly feel to it! I can’t get enough of your writing. π
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Thank you so much, my friend. That means a lot xx
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Beauty x
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Thank you xxx
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Such a lovely poem Gracie, but quite melancholy. Very fitting for the time of year though I think as the shadows lengthen and we stretch into Winter. Lots of love to all xxx
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Thank you, Melissa. Yeah, I agree xxx love to you too
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Love this omg ππ You have such an amazing way with words π
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Thank you so much, Andrea βΊοΈ
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That gave me goosebumps… O.O
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Thanks for reading, Julia.
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Gracie that is beautifully written xxxxx
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Thank you, Nanny.
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Gracie, is this your best piece yet?
I like this very much, this is a poem with a lot of purpose, I had to read it several times to make it sink in, but is now roved in strong.
How was the sail, Gracie?
Take care and keep writing, and sailing!
Tom.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it, Tom. Thank you very much π The sail was brilliant. I’ll send you an email about it with some photos.
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I like much this poem, will you include it in your spoken word list?
I’m glad your sail was exhilarating, I bet you are still bouncing!
Okay, I look forward to receiving your email.
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I most certainly am still bouncing! I’ll send it later today π
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You always seem very reserved but i can imagine you bouncing with excitement.
Okay I am looking forward to receiving it.
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Really?! Do you see me as reserved? I guess I can be, it depends on the situation π€ Anyway, you should see me when I’m near the sea – I’m definitely not reserved then π
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Yes, often reserved, but not always. How dose my disposition reflect, do i seem reserved or manic?
When I am at sea, I usually react contrary to the conditions, I only get hysterical when my boat is floundering in a hurricane fifty miles from the shore!
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Interesting! You definitely do not come across as reserved π
Have you ever floundered in a hurricane 50 miles from the shore then? π I sent that email. It’s being a bit stubborn, but it should come through soon
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I class my self as hysterically reserved.
Gracie, do I look like the kind of person who flounders boats fifty miles of the coast in a hurricane? Gracie, Gracie, do I seem like someone who gets HYSTERICAL!!
Okay I just received the email, will read and reply.
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Interesting π
I got your reply – will go read now
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Okay,
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I really enjoyed this poem. It was really very enchanting and certainly very powerful. I do hope that the « maybes » can come true.
The world is starting to collapse for everyone.
Erin x
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Thank you, Erin. Me too. I am always wishing on maybes. I do so hope they come true xxx
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I have no words Gracie, as always this is beautiful and so meaningful. xo
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Thank you so much, Emily xxx
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Oh goodness you write amaaazingg poetry!!! This is SO good! Xxxxx
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Thank you so much, lovelyyyy. Loads of love to you. When are you around to talk? Xxxxxx
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Eeee how about today? Late afternoon? Say yesssπππxxxx
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YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS okay, what time lol? Xx
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YAAAAAYYYYYY jshsajsh around 3:30 or 4pm? If that’s okay?? X
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Okay, sounds good. 4pm would probably be better so…speak to you then?!?! XXXπ
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Yeaaaah done!! Xxxπππ
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Awesomeeeee xxxxπ
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This is something else entirely.. so beautiful.
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Aw, so glad you enjoyed xx thank you
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Wow, this was powerful to read.
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Thank you so much! Xx
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